Until life fades away (jeff/cofang)

A lone Arrancar walked though Las Noches, he did not have a Arrancar uniform nor did he resemble anyone who was part of Las Noches. He was wearing nothing but tore old cloths, not shirt on only pants. Holding his Zanpokuto looking around Las Noches very curious like.

"What an interesting place, I can feel many strong and dense spirit pressures. What power is this, it exceeds my own, how wonderful. It seems iv not went past everyone, I do not think I could keep living knowing I was the stronges."

Suddenly Donglitzen felt a presence coming towards his area. A strong dense Reiatsu. Much stronger than his own, he was amazed at how much more power this being had. Just standing now waiting for this being to appear, Donglitzen followed the spirit pressure all the way until he meet with Donglitzen.

"What a amazing Reiatsu, iv never felt one this powerful. If I stay here I surely will be able to find more information about my goal." Turning around with a serious look on his face, greeting the new face appearing.

(Okay first I recommend you use color coding when you post example
"My name is Donglitzen,you are?"
He thought,Who is this guy... readability improves drastically if you use color coding on speech and thoughts.Also a few Grammar issues,I've is I've not iv,grammar is grammar no matter how small the issue,I is always capitalized if it is a word by it self and a conjunction is bringing two words together and taking out some letters with an apostrophe so I've is really I have so it goes I the apostrophe takes out the ha in have and you end up with I've okay?Also these words need Capitalized due to being Proper Nouns and names,Arrancar,Zanpokuto,Las Noches,Reitsu or Reiatsu,and Donglitzen.Lastly,Your post lack sentence structure at times and get rather hard to read,example "Just standing now waiting for this being to appear, donglitzen followed the spirit pressure all the way until he meet with donglitzen." It should be something like this,Donglitzen stood waiting for this being to appear,he followed the Spiritual Pressure until it met Donglitzen.I recommend you read your post aloud to pick up these mistakes,this really confuses people sometimes and though that isn't a great sentence to begin with it sounds better correct?Anyway,back to the RP)
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Jeff stood atop the Las Nochas main building waiting for something exciting to happen when he noticed someone whiffing around with no exactly "exciting" power, but it was worth a peek to see who and what it was seeing as it was not aligned to the Espada judging by his torn and tattered apparel.Jeff Sonido'd down and walked up to the being at hand slightly disappointed that if this turned into a fight it would be little more then a warmup,he sighed and looked at the being at hand "Your Arrancar all right... and your not an Espada,nor are you all that powerful,so what the fuck are you doing coming into Las Nochas like you own the damn place" he asked a trace of annoyance in his voice.He heard everything he said and was more than willing to tear him a new asshole if needed,hell he'd do it just out of spite,annoyance,and boredom.Jeff sighed as he awaited the damned fools answer and relaxed his grip on his Zanpokuto knowing of the idiot did choose to attack he could defeat him unarmed,not that he would choose to do it that way but if he had to he very well and with relative ease,could.He sighed as a Gillian appeared behind the newcomer,"I'd duck if I were you"as he said this he formed a Bala in the tip of his finger and launched it at the Gillian easily making a hole in its head and killing it."Now then where were we"...

Jeff wore the standard Espada uniform with holes in the sides for his Resseruccion and it was also baggy as all hell seeing as he grew about 8 inches and gained 30 pounds when released all of which was muscle.His Scythes sheathe was on his back and you could see some of the blade shape of the sheathe sticking out by his back and his pants ran down his legs baggy as well and his shoes stuck out revealing black Converses.His hair was blueish black almost light light purple but not quite and reached down to just above his deep,sea blue eyes which mirrored the endless moonlight of Hueco Mundo almost perfectly when he gazed upon its what could only be described as beauty.He then shook his head while closing his eyes and spoke to the man before him ""I am Jeff Andrews Espada Sexto or number six,if you plan on attacking leave now,or prepare to be slaughtered if you have other business here however,state it now so that I do not have to slit your throat and be made to clean my blade".He said this rather nonchalantly as if he couldn't care less whether or not he was given the chance to slit his throat or not,which was completely false,he wanted to kill him,just like everything else that opposed him in any way and this was outright defiance,he stepped into Las Noches,that was Jeff's turf so he better have a damn good reason for it.

Jeff smirked as he knew the man realized the humongous power difference he noticed the man sigh and place his Zanpokuto in his sheathe and grinned "My my you do have a brain,I was beginning to get concerned though I must say if your bright enough to realize the power difference then why the hell you came here is beyond me" He then listened to him attempt to explain Holy shit that's hard as hell to remember bro,can I at least drop the El on that shit,my memory ain't gonna remember that shit bro" he laughed at the rest of the response."No shit your newly evolved I could tell that from your low ass power level coupled with the fact you hardly understand how to use your powers or control them for that matter,your Reitsu was leaking like a faucet though I suppose your strong enough to be an underling". He grinned as he realized the man had some decent Pequissa as he noticed the Gillian right before Jeff killed it"Well your Pequissa is above average which is a very good trait to have as for your thanks I never need thanked for killing something I always enjoy that though for your last statement I can't say it would have been easy for someone of your level to do with an average Gillian,easy to an extent,but to much bullshit for me to wait for you to do it". He drew his scythe and showed it to the man "This things killed more living things then you've ever met which as a Hollow may or may not say something but in all likely hood I reckon I have killed well over ten thousand Humans, Hollows, Shingami, ,Bountos, Quincy, Vizards, you name it its killed it".

Jeff relaxed his grip on his blade and decided not to kill him as he seemed harmless and he could become of use to the Espada maybe and as he heard the mans reply he shook his head "Well duh I am an Espada for a reason,I mean be realistic I could have killed you one hundred times today,hell I could have blown your head off of easy"."I kind of was hoping at your present power if you planned on attacking Las Noches you at least came with a will of some sort,it would be a shame not to know whether you want buried or cremated". He heard the man say he did not plan on leaving and shook his head as he realized he wanted to stay and began to humor himself with mulling over the idea of letting this pathetic ass Arrancar stay,"The way I see it you can be killed and fertilize the soil if you'd like, or you could show me you have an ounce of fighting ability in which case you may be able to stay if you live for what I call a level up fight,I have 5 levels,one is easiest,5 the hardest,each one I will be at that power for two straight exchanges (Posts) then level up okay"?He grinned "Well,to be honest it's not exactly a choice you staying is not up to you but how on the other hand,is completely up to you".

Listening to the Espada speak of several things. Donglitzen felt he had no other choice but to sit and listen. Having listened up until a point in which the Espada brought up Donglitzens Pesquisa. "Yes my pesquisa is far above normal for my level as you say. If you want me to show you a test of just how above it is here let me show you. Iv already locked on to every Espada here in las noches, there appears to be exactly 7 Espada here in Las Noches at this moment in time." Donglitzen did not really care why the Espada would care about his pesquisa, but what caught dons attention was the fact that the espada said he had killed one of everything. "I see so you are saying you have fought and killed one of each race. Well what about sinners, just before I came here I had a run in with a so called sinner. He called himself by the name of Xull if I recall. Have you ever killed one of them."

Listening on to a little more rambling, Donglitzen was not sure what to think about this Espada just yet. He was powerful yes, but before when Donglitzen used his Pesquisa he felt the spirit pressure of several stronger opponents. Thinking to himself all the while listening to the Espada. Finally the Espada presented a challenge for Donglitzen. "I accept your offer Espada #6 Jeff Andrews. I never show an ounce of fear no matter how much stronger my opponent is. I guess this means we are in level one now heh, perfect."

Using sonido to flash forward, appearing in front of the espada. Trowing a series of punches then kicks towards the espada. Then taking a step back and placing his feet hard on the ground, charging a bala in both his left and right hands. "Taste my Bala Espada," shoving his right foot forward, then firing both bala from his hands at the same time."

Jeff noticed the man seemed to realized that the man realized it was best to listen or have his ass handed to him if he interrupted and as he spoke Jeff held the same smirk, "Yes well though you are somewhat correct you are also wrong,there are 6 Espada and then our leader Arngrim,I am lowest ranked due to choice,I am close in power to everyone up to the third Espada".Jeff grinned as he mentioned Sinners,"Yes I killed a few until I realized we,unfortunately,were on the same side,shame really,fun fights",he of course was just bluffing and had never done such a thing not that the man would know this,besides Jeff just probably hadn't remembered,not that it mattered.He smiled as the man accepted his offer though he seemed a bit cocky as he said he never was afraid and Jeff was determined to show him what fear was truly like and as he prepared to do this he laughed as the man said level one was perfect though Jeff knew he was obviously an idiot if he thought Jeff was weaker then him even on level one and he then prepared for the mans attacks.Boy oh boy this was going to be fun,Jeff was a bit excited as the man prepared to launch his attacks and Jeff soon realized that the man was not going to be a challenge.

Jeff saw the man Sonido forwards and he sighed as he attempted to grab the mans knuckle and with all his might break his hand as the second one came he dropped back and kicked at it which would easily break a knuckle or two if it hit and he then prepared for the next series.As the man went to make a kick Jeff sidestepped it and made a kick at the mans ribs and jumped up as the man stomped the ground and Jeff smiled at the false attempt at scaring Jeff which had to be what it was.Jeff saw the Bala come in and he grinned as the man said taste my Bala Espada and he shook his head "Yeah that will happen" Jeff watched the two Bala come in and he waited for them to almost make contact and as fast as they came Jeff slashed his scythe at them and cut them in half as they exploded then placed it back in its sheathe.The man would clearly see Jeff was unharmed and would probably remain this way and as he saw his expression as the attacks left Jeff unharmed Jeff yawned and spoke in shock "Oh that was all you were gonna throw at me today well well well maybe you will get to stay in the way of fertilizer if you don't want that you may wanna step it up their unless that's what you want and if that's the case,well continue to suck.

Jeff Sonido'd forwards and launched a Bala at the mans knee and as he did he appeared behind the man via Sonido and made a straight hand punch at the back of his head or if he turned his face and finished the combo with a knee to the back or gut and Sonido'd to his side and kicked him and if it hit he would end up 20 feet away or more.Jeff smiled as he then appeared to his side and launched a Bala at him straight on at his left leg and then he launched 5 Balas at the man one to the right one to the left one above one below and one right at his right leg.Jeff then appeared above the man and launched a Cero and as he Sonido'd back he launched his scythe on its Reitsu string at the man and made 3 horizontal slashes at him and then one vertical at his shoulder.Jeff grinned as he launched another Bala at the mans abdomen and waited for the smoke to clear to see what damage he had done to the poor soul.What was worse,this was still level one.

After the battle had started, and donglitzen had went though with his attacks. He was shown the real power of an Espada. When Donglitzen punched his wrist was caught by the Espada's hand. It was easy to tell that the espada had more than enough strength to break Donglitzens wrist. When going to punch with his other hand the espada went back and kicked it away. Not breaking any bones but clearly tearing away some arrancar skin in the way. Donglitzen was wanting his bala to hit but it seemed the Espada just slashed them away as if they were nothing. "Huhhhh.... no this is not all im going to be showing you today. Iv still got so much more do not think that I will give up. Like I said im not afraid of anything."

Finally starting to really see just how powerful an Espada is. His broken wrist shook and his eye's twitched at the thought of such power. Thinking to himself about the Espada only until his Pesquisa activated and he saw the Espada coming forward with a Bala. Having just enough time to Sonido to the side. Then the Espada appeared behind Donglitzen punching the back of his head. Not having enough time to react Donglitzen took the punch. Seeing the Espada appear kicking at Donglitzens gut, his only reaction was to bend down and block with both arms. Guarding himself the kick still knocked Donglitzen a good 10 feet away, cutting his shoulders in the process. Before the Espada appeared again, Donglitzen drew his Zanpokuto. Then a bala was launched towards Donglitzens left leg, reacting his placed his Zanpokuto at just the right angle to catch the Bala. Not having enough strength to block the bala all the way, the Bala slowly pushed him back about 4 feet. Then again the Espada fired not 1 but 5 Bala at Donglitzen. Attempting to Sonido to the right, his speed was not great enough to get away completely. A Bala caught him in his left shoulder knocking him back about 15 feet. Only having barely a second to react to the incoming Cero, having to Sonido a couple of feet ahead just enough to dodge the cero. When the 3 scythes attacks came, Donglitzen was unable to use his left arm. Only having his right arm and Zanpokuto to block with. He was able to block the attacks good enough to where he did not get killed, but the scythes still dug into Donglitzens chest making some clean cuts about an inch deep. Then a vertical attack from the scythe came, his only way of blocking was to place his Zanpokuto above him and support it with his left hand even though he could barely move it. Not wanting to die gave Donglitzen enough strength to move his left arm at that one moment. Finally unable to dodge the last Bala, he allowed it to hit him in the abdomen. Blood now running out of his mouth Donglitzen fell to on his knee's and h stuck his Zanpokuto into the ground and grabbed on to the hilt to hold himself up. [b]"What power, it seems my left arm is now useless to me, and that last Bala really did some internal damage to me. If this is only level 1 I can not wait to see what level 5 is heh heh."

Jeff smiled and laughed wickedly as he snapped the wrist like a puny twig with a sickening crack and he laughed as he knew it would not be used anymore and he then saw that the next fist was scuffed up pretty bad to. He laughed as the man noticed how easily he slashed away the Balas and made a smart ass comment "Oh I forgot to mention,level one is still way to strong for you but you should see level five,I will have to try NOT to kill you".He then laughed at the mans response "Let me guess what the next thing you'll show me is,your Will right? I hope so because if not you will be needing it if this is all you have because this isn't close to all my power and as for you not fearing anything that's a great trait but one that I will make sure is changed by the end of this battle when your either clinging to life out of stubbornness or dead". He then laughed wildly and maniacally as the man got ready for what Jeff was going to do and he knew for a fact this guy was not tough enough to take Jeff on and as Jeff finished off all the attacks on the man he waited to evaluate the situation to see how the man was doing and to his utter shock the man was still alive and breathing and able to move and talk which was pretty good for someone of his power.He still should have stayed down though,now hell would seem like heaven compared to what Jeff was going to do.He noticed the man was bleeding at the mouth and after all the damage he'd done he could only think of one person,Hiei,and look what came of that bastard Jeff laughed.

Jeff surveyed all the damage he had inflicted to the man and noticed he had done internal damage made sure he had lost most movement of his left arm and several cuts at the mans chest and made several nasty bruises on the man just to state a few things that he had done to the man and he then grinned.Oh lord this guy was still breathing,that was a shame yet a good thing,felt like he was fighting a 10 year old at the age of 18,the outcome was obvious but if the ten year old was stupid enough he may not see it that way though he would after having a new asshole torn in his face.The man complimented Jeff and Jeff simply grinned at them with that asshole smile he had given so many times to so many people and this was another person to witness it.[color:9ad5=darkred"Though I thank you for your compliment I must say you are not very bright,level 5 you see,you must live to see that if you hope to see true power of which you still have not seen here is a good example your wrist is only broken in a few places,I could have broke every piece of that puny fucker if I felt like it instead you have what you have now".]Jeff let this sink in as he grinned at the man and he slowly paced towards him with a slight grin on his face "Now then,if your so eager for level 5 lets make sure you can survive level 1 here aye my good sir,it'd be a shame if you died to quickly so try to make this last".

Jeff made a quick slash at the mans left leg and a kick at his right knee in attempt at taking them out as he watched his pathetic attempts as he used his sword to hold him up "Bow before me you worthless scum bag" Jeff made 13 vertical slashes at the mans stomach arms and chest and then a horizontal one at his pelvis.Such brutality was part of the Jeff battle style and he used this type of brutality with pride as he quickly decided to see if the man could step up in case of his life being endangered and as he did he quickly made a slash at his knees and a kick at his knees and quickly yelled "Begone" as he launched a Cero point blank at his foe and Sonido'd back to see if he was still alive and if he was if he was even still moving,he then grabbed his neck and began to massage it as he walked towards the man and then he launched a quick valley of Bala at the surrounding area and grabbed his scythe and licked the tip of the blade as the blood reached his tongue he smiled at the man with glee "Well well well if you did survive level one congratulations now without further ado lets show you level two,yes you heard me,your one step closer to level five or death I should say to be completely fair"Jeff said this with the grin a Wolf gets chasing an injured sheep,god he loved kicking ass and this guy was fun to beat in general.

Donglitzen was ignoring everything the Espada was saying now. He was dizzy and he was having trouble standing up. His left arm was done for, it was of no use to Donglitzen now, and he was still bleeding from the mouth. "Iv never felt this way, it is like my body is hardly reacting to what I am telling it to do. Everything is numb, I do not even thing I have the strength to use my resurrecion any more." Watching as the Espada rushed again to attack, Donglitzen was not sure if he would survive.

Moving his Zan to the side to block the slash coming towards his legs, then taking the kick which miss a couple inches and hardly even touched Doonglitzens leg but instead hit his abbs. Only being able to hold his Zan up to his chest to block the slashes from the Espada's blade, then placing it above his head to block the attack aiming down the middle. The Espada's blade slide down Donglitzens Zan and cut open a large section of Donglitzens left arm. The brutally taking a cut to the left knee then a kick to the right, Remaining on the ground, until his pesquisa gave signs of the Espada being very close and firing a point blank Cero. The only way to live though the attack was to risk losing his left arm. Quickly stabbing the Cero with his Zan, forcing the blast to become uneven. The Cero instead of going straight went to the left and erased Donglitzens left arm. "OH boy more Bala, I think this is all I can do now, Cero."
Blasting a decent size and power Cero at the Bala, negating a few and causing the rest to be knocked to the side, barely missing Donglitzen. "I think I survived round 1 ugh." Hardly enough strength to get those few words out of his mouth, donglitzen was left alive but barely alive on the field.

Jeff saw the man struggle against all his attacks and knew the Cero would do too much damage so he drew back on it and let him keep any limbs he’d lose from it or anything of that sort. (Your arms still intact) Jeff then sighed and picked him up and carried him into the infirmary so that he could be fixed up and sighed “Very well you can be my Fraccion but you will need to train hard under me but all in due time, now you need time to heal so let’s get you in here shall we”? Jeff turned his Reitsu down to its lowest level and walked into the healing center “He needs help so go ahead and fix up so go ahead and fix him up. Jeff walked off with a sly grin on his face and shook his head, well, he just got him a new trainee, who knows, could be the next Hiei, or not, it was definitely something to strive for though and Jeff immediately knew what to do. He smiled and walked towards his living quarters and as tired as he was he didn’t have a scratch on him, he sighed “What a pain in the ass”.

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